Minggu, 27 April 2014

Business Letter

Emily Durkee
2 empire street
Lynn, MA 01903

November 5, 2010

Mr. Tomy Hendarso
Candy Company
50 E main street
Vancouver, WA 98685

Dear Mr. Tomy

My name is Emily and I want to say that I am really apparent thanks for the products that you create. it's probably the stickiest snack i have ever eaten. i also love when i'm chewing an i feel the stickiness in my teeth. i must say that it's a lot more enjoyable than hard or soft candy that i can never seem to get out my teeth. who would've thought that the combination of fluff and peanut butter would have such a mouth watering taste ? sometimes, i think of fluff as i fluff my pillow

Although i enjoy your product, i have a suggestion that my help the product receive more attention. many people enjoy the fluffernutter, but it's exhausting spreading the fluff and then the peanut butter. My suggestion to you is to combine fluff and peanut butter into a squeezable bottle. we can call it "Peanutterfluff." it would be much easier to make the fluffernutter because all we have to do is squeeze and spread. No  more scooping out of the two jars. Peanutterfluff can become a top selling product for your company. i hope that you take my suggestion into consideration.


Sincerely yours,




Emily Durkee

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